纵观历年读后续写高考真题,虽然故事千变万化,但是无外乎以下几种故事类型:善行义举类,个人成长类,探险脱困类,亲情友情类和人与动物型。读后续写的主题升华方式虽然貌似没有定数,但是我们依然可以从中找到一些规律进而提升应试能力。狂飙英语梳理各种读后续写后故事类型后发现, 读后续写无外乎三种常见结尾方式:
方法一:首尾呼应法
2017 年高考真题,讲述的是与健忘妈妈一块去旅游的故事。
文章的开头是这样的: I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother--loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful.
那么续写结尾的时候可以用首尾呼应的写作手法回到文章的开头再次重申妈妈的性格,来深化主题。
例如: Despite mom's being absent-minded and forgetful, she was still a kind and nice mom.
再如 2016 年浙江高考样题,开头: A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.
结尾可以这样呼应:
What a funny day ! Arthur couldn't stop laughing whenever he looked back on this experience.
方法二:留白式结尾法
记叙文通常结尾会有场景画面留白似的结尾,一般是写景和人物描写结合。让读者合理联想,回味悠长。
① The pure snowflakes were dancing gracefully in the air, making a beautiful picture.纯净的雪花在空中优雅起舞,构成了一幅美丽的画面。
② Bathed in the warm light of the setting sun, the three made their way home happily.沐浴在温暖的夕阳余晖中,三人开开心心地踏上了回家的路。
③ No matter how cold the winter was, all that they could feel now was the surpassing warmth.无论冬日曾多么寒冷,此刻他们所能感受到的,唯有那极致的温暖。
方法三:主题升华式结尾法
这一结尾方式,在完型语篇非常常见。完型语篇多是短小精悍,形象生动的文章,通常在结尾以一句话,画龙点睛地揭示蕴含的道理,它们篇幅小但寓意深刻,语言不多却值得回味,这恰似读后续写对主题的升华,所以很多时候做完形填空题都有看读后续写范文的即视感。
① I held the paper bag tightly, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around, which I felt deep in my heart.我紧紧攥着纸袋,眼泪不受控制地滚落。“爱让世界运转”这句话,此刻深深烙印在我心底。
② From then on, I would try my best to help them like the family. Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.从那以后,我会像那家人一样,尽全力去帮助他人。唯有如此,未来才会有越来越多的人互帮互助。
③ Whatever happens in our lives, we can't give up or lose our faith and hope.无论生活中发生什么,我们都不能放弃,也不能丢失信念与希望。
④ No one is born a success. People make themselves into successes by their own efforts.没有人天生就是成功者。人们是通过自身的努力,才让自己成为成功者的。
⑤ Be happy and live positively. We should try to take eyes off our problems and enjoy each moment that life gives us.要快乐地生活,积极地面对一切。我们应该试着放下眼前的烦恼,享受生活赐予的每一刻。
⑥ Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference. We should pass forward the kindness.有时候,一个小小的善举,力量却足以带来巨大的改变。我们应当将这份善意传递下去。
⑦ What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any trouble as long as we stay calm.多么难忘的经历啊!原来只要保持冷静,任何困境都总有解决的办法。
⑧ In this life every single bit of love we share finds its way back to us again. The love we share, the kindness we give, and the joy we create will always come back to bless us.这辈子,我们分享的每一份爱,最终都会以某种方式回馈到自己身上。我们付出的爱、给予的善意、创造的快乐,终将回来眷顾我们。
⑨ How wonderful the life of everyone would be if this kindness spread everywhere. 若这份善意能传遍每一个角落,每个人的生活将会多么美好啊。
读后续写不同故事类型主题升华模板:
善行义举类(爱的传递)
1. 有时候,我们小小的行动可以给别人带来很大的不同。我们应该把爱传递下去。 Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a great difference. We should pass on the kindness.
2. 许多年过去了,但我永远不会忘记玛格丽特的圣诞礼物和她的善举。 Many years have passed, but I will never forget Margret's Christmas gifts and her act of kindness.
3. 母亲给了我们每个人一个大大的拥抱,在我们的眼中低语: “ 谢谢你们的好意。是你的爱温暖了我们。 ”The mother gave each of us a big hug, whispering in our eyes, “Thank you for your kindness. It's your love that has warmed us up.”
4. 我突然想到,一个简单的举动可以让世界变得更美好。 It occurred to me that a simple act could make the world so much better.
5. 虽然外面的风还在呼啸,但一股暖流涌上心头。 Although the wind still screamed outside, a warm current rose in my heart.
个人成长类 ( 励志故事 )
1. 在你身上发生了什么并不重要,重要的是你如何应对。 It's not what happens to you, but how you react to it that matters.
2. 勇敢点并努力。你终将制造奇迹。 Be brave and make efforts. You will end up creating miracles.
3. 无论发生什么,我们都不能放弃和失去信念和希望。 Whatever happens in our lives, we can’t give up or lose our faith and hope.
4. 每个人都像一朵花,有的有香味,有的没有。你若盛开,蝴蝶自来。 Everyone is like a flower, some having fragrance, but some not. As long as you bloom, there will be butterflies.
5. 正如谚语所说,永远不会失败。我要么赢,要么学习。 Just as a saying goes, “Never lose. I either win or learn.”
6. 成功之路并不平坦。它充满了挑战和困难。 The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties.
7. 任何一个有梦想,有勇气和毅力的人都会成功。 Anyone with a dream, courage and persistence will be successful.
8. 直到那时我才意识到成为你可能成为的人永远都不晚。 Only then did I realized that it's never too late to be all you can possibly be.
9. 人类历史上最伟大的发现是一个人可以通过改变他的态度来改变他的未来。 The greatest discovery of all time is that a person can change his future by merely changing his attitude.
10. 你无法控制他人的行为,但你可以选择如何应对。 You cannot control the behavior of others, but you can always choose how you respond to it.
探险脱困类
1. 真是死里逃生啊! What a narrow escape!
2. 每当我回想起那次惊心动魄的经历,我仍然会感到一种强烈的恐惧感。 I would still feel a strong sense of fear whenever I looked back on the thrilling experience.
3. 事实证明,只要我们保持冷静,任何困境都是有出路的。 It turned out that there is always a way out of any difficult situations as long as we stay calm.
4. 我从来没有陷入过这样危险的境地。这段经历深深地刻在了我的脑海里,提醒我要尊重自然。 Never had I fallen into such a dangerous situation. The experience was deeply engraved in my mind and reminded me to respect the nature.
5. 我们已经遭受的一切终将会让我们变得更好。不要放弃直到幸事发生。 All that we have suffered will eventually make us better. Don't give up until the blessing happens.
亲情友情类
1. 妈妈仅仅抱着双胞胎,小声说,这是这个世界上最好的惊喜。 The Mother hugged the twins tightly, whispering, “This is the best surprise in the world!”
2. 直到那时我才意识到我妈妈是多么爱我。 Only then did I realized that how much my mom loved me.
3. 我突然想到,家人的爱是我一生中最大的礼物。 It occurred to me that family love is the greatest gift in life.
4. 就是在那时我充分理解了家庭的重要性。 It was at that moment that I had a full understanding of the significance of family.
5. 全家人都沐浴在幸福与爱之中。The whole family was bathed in happiness and love.
6.这个生日注定会永远留在我的记忆里,照亮我未来的路。This birthday is bound to be kept in my memory forever, lightening my future path.
7.爱能打破隔阂。 Love can break down the barriers.
人与动物类
1. 这只神奇的小猫正在改变我们的生活,而这仅仅是开始。This magical kitten was changing our lives and this was just the beginning.
2.我不时地看这张照片,以此提醒自己要尊重所有的动物。毕竟我们只是动物世界的访客。 From time to time I look the photo as a reminder to show respect to all animals. After all, it’s we who are the visitors to their world.
3. 狼看起来好些了,它缓缓抬起头,轻轻舔了舔贝基的手,仿佛在表达谢意。Appearing to be feeling better, the wolf slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Becky’s hand as if to express thanks.
4.狗狗用脑袋蹭了蹭我们的手,仿佛在说要谢谢我们。.Using its head, the dog touched our hands, seemingly saying that we were to be thanked.
5.当我们平安回家后,我们意识到应该为熊做点什么。After we returned home safe and sound, we realized that something should be done for bears.


